山顶冻人 发表于 2023-9-29 12:46:08

回忆那些年曾经深深爱过的女孩~~~

      我爱的人已经飞走了,爱我的人她还没有来到。(林依伦《爱情鸟》歌词)

      青春是无比美好的,也是十分短暂的,充满了许多难忘回忆和无比彷徨。
      记得青春期还在上高中的时候,有个同龄女孩主动追求我。都说“女追男隔层纱(如隔一层纸)”,经过几次的追求,少男一颗驿动的心开始春心荡漾了……于是,学业之余、花前月下,我们双双坠入了爱河~~~

      高中一毕业,在父母的建议下,我们先开始定亲,然后谈婚论嫁。谁曾想,这个几年来贴在我身上卿卿我我我最爱❤️的初恋女友,却突然变卦,说我们不适合……然后就避而不见,更别谈什么定亲和结婚了~~~

      少年初刚被点燃的激情火焰,此刻犹如迎面遭遇了一头凉水,浇得我浑身打颤,多少年来都痛苦无比、悲痛欲绝~~~

      人生若只如初见,何事秋风悲画扇。握不住的沙,不如扬了它;留不住的人,让他走了罢~~~


         
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白马渔仔 发表于 2023-9-29 16:30:57

一点建议别多心啊https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_073.png

绿豆鲨 发表于 2023-9-29 14:01:03

还没放下https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_wulian.png

山顶冻人 发表于 2023-9-29 14:56:39

绿豆鲨 发表于 2023-09-29 14:01
还没放下

对于真爱的人来说,失恋永远是这世间痴情的人心底最最的痛哦~~~https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_076.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_081.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_wulian.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_006.png

白马渔仔 发表于 2023-9-29 16:30:21

文笔很好https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_075.png
不过要相信广大网友的语文水平,以后少用不用括弧https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_051.png

山顶冻人 发表于 2023-9-29 20:05:25

白马渔仔 发表于 2023-09-29 16:30
一点建议别多心啊

在错的时间遇到对的人,结果是一声叹息啊~~~https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_076.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_081.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_wulian.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_025.png

山顶冻人 发表于 2023-9-29 22:29:25


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山顶冻人 发表于 2023-9-29 22:31:55

白马渔仔 发表于 2023-09-29 16:30
文笔很好
不过要相信广大网友的语文水平,以后少用不用括弧

用自然有用的道理,表示特此注明,或特别强调,避免读者误解或产生歧义。各人的认知、三观、喜好等等都不一样的,要照顾到更多的人或大部分人才好呀~~~https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_076.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_081.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_wulian.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_032.png

A贺 发表于 2023-9-30 05:09:49

总感觉高中时代用少年有点别扭https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_wulian.png

山顶冻人 发表于 2023-9-30 08:16:46

A贺 发表于 2023-09-30 05:09
总感觉高中时代用少年有点别扭

个人认为没有什么不妥,高中的学生一般都在15~19岁,男孩用少年,女孩用少女,不是正当时,有啥别扭的呢?难道用“小大人”“成年男子”,或用别的什么才更适合呢?https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_076.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_081.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_wulian.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_025.png

A贺 发表于 2023-10-1 07:14:56

山顶冻人 发表于 2023-09-30 08:16
个人认为没有什么不妥,高中的学生一般都在15~19岁,男孩用少年,女孩用少女,不是正当时,有啥别扭的呢?难道用“小大人”“成年男子”,或用别的什么才更适合呢?

少先队,青年团还是很好的交代了年龄

山顶冻人 发表于 2023-10-1 10:32:20

A贺 发表于 2023-10-01 07:14
少先队,青年团还是很好的交代了年龄

用“小伙子”也可以考虑的哦~~~https://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_076.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_081.pnghttps://app.hongze.net/public/emotion/face_wulian.png

山顶冻人 发表于 2023-10-2 22:34:31


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山顶冻人 发表于 2023-10-17 06:23:33


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山顶冻人 发表于 2024-2-16 20:57:28


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